I'd love to see some type of trail of pixie dust to the right. There's so much negative space that despite her placement my eye keeps moving away from her. Needs something to bring attention back to your name. Maybe a sparkle trail that runs thru RyPhoto and finishes at her wings, as if she just landed. That's gold, baby!
Lower the wings so they rest just above the type, right? Would make a good business card maybe....ok, it's late, I need to go to bed.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE IT! i would love to see tinkerbell too! :)
ReplyDeleteWhat it needs is a good light man. Hint Hint Cuz
ReplyDeleteYay, I was waiting to see Silvermist! She looks beautiful...nice job RyPhoto.
ReplyDeleteI'd love to see some type of trail of pixie dust to the right. There's so much negative space that despite her placement my eye keeps moving away from her. Needs something to bring attention back to your name. Maybe a sparkle trail that runs thru RyPhoto and finishes at her wings, as if she just landed. That's gold, baby!
ReplyDeletethis is fun!!! There could be several variations of your logo. It could be less clean, maybe transluscent to match her wings. Great job Ry.
ReplyDeleteMuch better. I like the long, downward wings.
ReplyDeleteBig improvement!
Nice,
ReplyDeleteThis looks cool. Are those wings real?
<3 this!!!
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